Group members:
Bissaro Lucrezia
Dal Ben Francesca
Giorgio Annalisa
This is our presentation:
NationalCelebrations_final.ppt.ppt
In our presentation we are going to analyse three peculiar American celebrations, focusing on American habits and tradions. As far as the Independence Day and Labor Day are concerned ,we will make a comparison with the italian Festa della Repubblica and Festa del lavoro,casting light on similarities and differences between the two countries.
American celebrations
- Independence Day
- Thanksgiving Day
- Labor Day
Independence Day
It is a federal holiday, it is considered the America's birthday and it commemorates the signing of Declaration of Independence by the Continental Congress in Philadelphia( Pennsylvenia) on July 4 in 1776.
At the time the US consisted of 13 Colonies under the rule of Britain King George III, forced to pay taxes to England. A host of consumer goods including tea, paper and glass were taxed. In 1765 the British government passed The Stamp act that put taxes on all documents , newspapers and books. The situation got worse when the Americans realized that they had no representation on Parliament: it was the major objection of the 13 Colonies " Taxation witout represation"
As the claims were not listened by the English Parliament and George III didn't anything to help their situation, but just sent troops to controll the rebellion acts, the Colonies managed to obtain the separation from Great Britain.
On 4 July 1776 the Continental Congress met in Philadelphia to start drafting a document which would definetely cut any connection with Britain dominance.The members of the Commitee were Thomas Jefferson, Benjamin Franklin, John Adams, Roger Sherman and Robert R. Livingston.
Thomas Jefferson was chosen to write the first draft of Declaration of Independence, which was on 28 july 1776 signed by John Hancock, the president of the Continental Congress.
.Of the 13 colonies, 9 voted in favour of the Declaration, 2 ( Pennsylvania and South Carolina) voted against it, whereas Delaware remained undecided and New York abtained.
After the War of Independence ended in 1783 and the Declaration was read out in various cities in the colonies, the Fourth of July became an official holiday in some parts of the Union but it didn't become a federal holiday until 1941.
Fourth of July Rituals
The most important ritual at the Independence day is sharing food and drinks while someone tells stories and memories of past times.
Typically the places chosen for dining are taverns, public buildings, coffee houses. However, depending on the weather almost all events are held ooutdoors.
Picnics, barbecues are set up in green areas, where one can also enjoy the shadow of trees
There is a saying that on Independence day people must eat red, white and blue food, they must also wear these colours, and someone uses to paint his face as well!
As far as the food is concerned it's not so easy to find blue things in the American diet (expections are blueberries and cheese)!
Anyway the traditional menu is an easy one: hamburgers and hot dogs are the main dishes, also because it is easier to have a grill outdoors, and accompaniments potato salad, coleslaw, green salad with ripe and red tomatoes.Whatever it happens, the Fourth of July is not completed without toasted marshmallows and watermelon.
Obviously drinks are cool beer and iced tea for children!
FIREWORKS
Photo taken from:http://whatsupnyc.com/blog/archives/Rainbow.jpg
In the United States from coast to coast in any city and suburban neighbourhood , fourth of July is celebrated with fireworks, parades and private parties
In New York the traditional Fireworks is sponsored by the world's largest store, Macy's and it is also said to be the largest fireworks in the world.Musket -fire and cheers have always been an important part of any Fourth of July celebration.:when the Declaration of Independence was read to the people, it was met by cheers and musket-fire.
PARADE
The most important America's parade takes place in Washington D.C and usually has a street audience of over 300,000 spectators. The Parade consists of invited bands, military,floats and VIP's, where anyone can admire a patriotic, flag waving, red white and blue celebration of America's birthday. Bands are invited based on recommendations from each state's Governor's office. Other times these recommendations come from a state's music educators office or the state tourism board at the governor's request. United States is the goal of the parade National Selection Committee.
The marching bands at the the parade are 20-25( including fife and drum corps), the floats 15,20 speciality units made up of military, giant ballons, drills team.
Moreover after the parade there is the so called Folklife Festival on the Mall features different cultures in the Americas and a variety of ethnic groups.
FOURTH OF JULY AT SCHOOL
All schoolchildren in the US memorise part of the Declaration of Independence: The first line are: " We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unaliable Rights, that among these are LIfe, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness"
Brief comparison with La Festa della Repubblica in Italy.
On the 2nd June of every year is celebrated in Italy La festa della Repubblica. This date refers to the referendum of 1946 asking Italians which form of government they would prefer: monarchy or republic.After 85 years of reign Italy became a Republic with 12.717.923 votes in favour ( votes against were 10.719.284)
This feast could be compared to the 4 th of july in America, or the 14 th of july in France.
In1948 for the first time there has been a parade through Via dei Fori Imperiali in Rome, the following year ( when Italy became member of NATO) this parade took place all through the country.
1950 the feast was registered in the Italian Protocol as national celebration.
Nowadays the celebration consists of an army parade and the bringing of bay wreath , which is the emblem of victory ,to Il Milite Ignoto ( Unknown Soldier)- the monumental grave representing all the unknown men and heroes dead for the Nation.
Italians, in comparison to Americans don’t feel this celebration, they don’t share stories or listen to patriotic speeches and parades are organized only in Rome. La festa della Repubblica has become a longer weekend, where one can go to the beach or have some relax. Anyway if this celebration was felt, there would so many interesting things to partecipate at. For example,le frecce tricolori , which are the National flying circus of Italian army. It was founded in 1961 and it consists of 10 planes: 9 part of the aircraft in flight and the one left is the led fligter. This circus is the biggest one all over the world.
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Thanksgiving Day
HISTORY OF THANKSGIVING
In 1620, a boat called Mayflower, filled with more than one hundred people sailed across the Atlantic Ocean to settle in the New World. The Pilgrims settled in what is now the state of Massachusetts. During the first winter they had many difficulties to face, they didn’t have fresh food and half the colony died from disease.
The leaders of the Wampanoag Indian tribe and their families helped the pilgrims of Plymouth Rock. They taught them how to grow corns and other crops and how to hunt and fish.
A FEAST OF THANKS
In the autumn of 1621 the Pilgrims of Plymouth Rock had a good harvest, and Governor William Bradford proclaimed a day of thanksgiving and prayer. Local Indians took part in the celebration. The feast lasted three days. The Indian brought deer to roast with the turkeys and the colonists learned how to cook cranberries and different kinds of corn and squash dishes from the Indians. To this first Thanksgiving, the Indians had even brought popcorn.
The feast was a thank you celebration for the good harvest. The colonists were also thankful to the leaders of the Wampanoag Indian tribe and their families for teaching them the survival skills they needed to make it in the New World. Without the precious help of the Indians the colonist would not have survived.
For the feast the men of Plymouth shot ducks, geese and turkeys. They also cooked clams, eel and other fish, wild plums and leeks, corn bread, and watercress. Everyone ate outdoors at large tables and enjoyed games.
In following years, the custom to celebrate the autumn harvest with a feast of thanks spread from Plymouth to other New England colonies, but each region chose its own date.
Although there is record of earlier thanksgiving celebrations (most notably in 1619 at Berkeley Plantation, Virginia), Americans trace their traditional Thanksgiving holiday to one celebrated in 1621 at the Plymouth Colony (now in the state of Massachusetts).
A NEW TRADITIONAL HOLIDAY
In 1789 George Washington, the first president of the United States, proclaimed November 26 a day of Thanksgiving. For many years the country had no regular national Thanksgiving Day. In 1830 New York had an official state Thanksgiving Day, and soon after other States in the North followed its example. In 1855, Virginia became the nation’s first Southern state to adopt the custom
Sarah Josepha Hale, the editor of Godey’s Lady’s Book, worked many years to promote the idea of a national Thanksgiving Day.
In 1863, President Lincoln, at the end of a bloody civil war, addressed to all Americans and asked them to observe a special day of thanksgiving. He chose the last Thursday of November as "a day of thanksgiving and praise to our beneficent Father" [1]. After the war, many Southerners saw the new holiday as an attempt to impose Northern customs on them.
Since then, for 75 years, the President proclaimed that Thanksgiving Day should be celebrated on the last Thursday of November.
In 1939 President Franklin D. Roosevelt changed the date of the celebration and he set the celebration the week earlier. However, since some states used the new date and others the old, it was changed again 2 years later.
Thanksgiving Day is now celebrated on the fourth Thursday in November.
Today Thanksgiving Day is a big family reunion which is celebrated with big dinners. It is a time for tradition and sharing, family members, who live far away, reach their families and older relatives for the family feast. All give thanks for the good thinks they have to the Divine Providence. For this reason it is also a fest for religious prayers and thanks to God.
Charitable organizations offer a traditional meal to those in need such as the homeless.
The day after Thanksgiving gradually became known as the first day of the Christmas shopping season. To attract customers, large retailers such as Macy’s in New York and Gimbel’s in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, began to sponsor parades. By 1934 the Macy’s parade, featuring richly decorated floats and gigantic balloons attracted more than one million spectators annually. (source Encarta)
PRECURSORS
Long before Europeans settled in North America, western Europeans observed Harvest Home festivals to celebrate the successful completion of gathering-in the season’s crops. If the wheat crop was disappointing, the holiday was cancelled.
Another important precursor to the modern Thanksgiving holiday was the custom among English Puritans.
THANKSGIVING SYMBOLS
Many of the imagines and symbols derive from the older traditions of celebrating the autumn harvest. The following are the most traditional ones.
- The turkey. The celebration of Thanksgiving will be incomplete without the legendary Turkey. The Turkey derives its name from the 'turk turk' sounds that it makes when is scared. The famous 'Turkey' adorns the table of every household as a main course during the celebration.
- The Cornucopia also known as “horn of plenty” (a horn-shaped basket overflowing with fruits and vegetables) is a typical emblem of Thanksgiving abundance and harvest festival.
- Corn represents another important symbol of Thanksgiving. Some Americans considered blue and white corn to be sacred. The Indians taught the Pilgrims hot to grow corn and it became pa part of the first Thanksgiving dinner, this food tradition continues till now. Ornamental Corncobs are a favourite with the masses during the festival. The tables are decorated with harvest wreaths which is also a very popular gift item among Americans. Ornamental popcorns are also widely used. Corn reminds of the importance and heritage of the famous harvest festival and the foundation of American 'Modern-Agriculture '.
- Pumpkin. The 'Pumpkin pie' is another symbol at almost every Thanksgiving table. According to historians, the pumpkin is one of the important symbols of the harvest festival and has been an All American-favourite for over 400 years now.
- Beans are a special symbol of thanksgiving. Native Americans are believed to have taught the pilgrims to grow beans next to cornstalks.
- Cranberry, Originally called crane berry, has derived its name from its pink blossoms and drooping head which reminded the pilgrim of a crane. It is a symbol and a modern diet staple of thanksgiving. Pilgrims discovered how to sweeten the bitten cranberries with maple sugar. Ever since cranberry sauce is a traditional companion of turkey during thanksgiving feast.
TRADITIONAL FOOD
Preparing and eating a large meal is the central part in Thanksgiving Day. the celebration recalls the traditional feast for the plentiful harvest.
There are typical dishes: TURKEY represents the centrepiece on any. Thanksgiving is sometimes colloquially called Turkey Day (USA). The USDA estimated that 269 million turkeys were raised in the country in 2003, about one-sixth of which were destined for a Thanksgiving dinner plate.” (source: wikipedia). The use of the turkey in the USA for Thanksgiving relates back to Lincoln's nationalization of the holiday in 1863. Since a turkey could feed more than a chicken, those were sent to the troops instead as a more cost-effective feast.(wikipedia)
Other typical food are:
- Stuffing
- Mashed potatoes with gravy
- Sweet potatoes
- Cranberry sauce
- Indian corn
- Pumpkin pie
Turkey, corn (or maize), pumpkins and cranberry sauce are symbols which represent the first Thanksgiving Day.
According to tradition the Pilgrims received these foods from the American Indians. However, many of the classic traditions attributed to the first Thanksgiving are actually myths introduced later.
Later groups of immigrants to North America often adapted the traditional holiday menu to fit their own tastes. For example, many Italian American Thanksgiving menu include Italian specialties, such as pasta and wine.
Now all of these symbols are drawn on holiday decorations and greeting cards.
THANKSGIVING CUSTOMS
- Family dinner and reunion with feast held at home ( football games on television on Thanksgiving afternoon).
- Decorations. Thanksgiving is a time to decorate homes with wreaths, fresh and dried flowers, fruits and vegetables.
- Thanksgiving cards. Thanksgiving is a day when people send loving messages and warm wishes to their relatives, friends or colleagues.
- Parades, colourful balloons and children dressed in traditional costumes (for example like Pilgrims with bonnet or tall hats, dark clothes and shoes with large silver coloured buckles).
Slide 1
THANKSGIVING THE MOST RAPRESENTATIVE AMERICAN CELEBRATION
History
1620 Pilgrims on the boat Mayflower arrived to Plymouth Rock
Wampanoag Indian tribe offered their precious help to the Plymouth colony
1621 The abundant harvest and the first Thanksgiving feast celebrated by the Pilgrims and the Indians
Thanksgiving first menu ( turkey, corn, pumpkins, cranberry, clams, eel and other fish, wild plums and leeks, corn bread, and watercress)
The feast of thanks to the autumn harvest spread from Plymouth to other New England colonies on different dates
Slide 2
A NEW TRADITIONAL HOLIDAY
1789 President George Washington proclaimed November 26 a day of Thanksgiving
For many years the country had no regular national Thanksgiving
The contribution of Sarah Josepha Hale to promote the idea of a national Thanksgiving Day
1863 President Lincoln proclaimed the last Thursday in November as “ a day of thanksgiving and praise to our beneficent Father”
1939 President Franklin D. Roosevelt set the celebration the week earlier
Thanksgiving Day is now celebrated on the fourth Thursday in November
Slide 3
THANKSGIVING CELEBRATION
Thanksgiving Day is a big family celebration and reunions of family members living far away
Thanksgiving a big religious feast to thanks God for the good things received
The dinner is the central part in Thanksgiving Day
Turkey represents the centrepiece on any Thanksgiving table
Other typical foods are:
- Stuffing
- Mashed potatoes with gravy
- Sweet potatoes
- Cranberry sauce
- Indian corn
- Pumpkin pie
Slide 4
THANKSGIVING SYMBOLS
Many of the imagines and symbols derive from the older traditions of celebrating the autumn harvest. The following are the most traditional.
- · The turkey adorns the table of every household as a main course during the celebration.
- · The Cornucopia or the “horn of plenty”
- · Corn symbol of the famous harvest festival and the foundation of American 'Modern-Agriculture '.
- · Beans are a special symbol, Native Americans are believed to have taught the pilgrims to grow beans next to cornstalks.
- · Cranberry. Originally called crane berry, has derived its name from its pink blossoms and drooping head which reminded the pilgrim of a crane Ever since cranberry sauce is a traditional companion of turkey during Thanksgiving feast.
Slide 5
Thanksgiving customs
- Family dinner and reunion with feast held at home (football games on tv)
- Thankful families prayers in churches and homes
- Decorations. Houses are decorated with wreaths, fresh and dried flowers, fruits and vegetables.
- Thanksgiving cards containing warm wishes to relatives and friends
- Parades, colourful balloons and children dressed in traditional costumes
ITALY
Italian celebrations
Religious celebrations
Civil celebrations
Christmas celebration as big family feast
PRESENTATION ON WORD DOCUMENT
Labor Day

Photo source
For a lot of people, Labor Day means two things: a day off and the end of summer. But why is it called
Labor Day? Labor Day is a day set aside to pay tribute to working men and women. It has been celebrated as a national holiday in the United States and Canada since 1894.
Labor Day, the first Monday in September, is a creation of the labor movement and is dedicated to the social and economic achievements of American workers. It constitutes a yearly national tribute to the contributions workers have made to the strength, prosperity, and well-being of our country.
The first Labor Day parade occurred Sept. 5, 1882, in New York City. The workers' unions chose the first Monday in September because it was halfway between Independence Day and Thanksgiving. The idea spread across the country, and some states designated Labor Day as a holiday before the federal holiday was created. President Grover Cleveland signed a law designating the first Monday in September as Labor Day nationwide.
Labor Day proposal was initiated in the United States by the Knights of Labor. Accordingly a committee was formed to plan a demonstration and picnic. In 1882 the Knights of Labor held a large parade in New York City. In 1884 the group held a parade on the first Monday of September and passed a resolution to hold all future parades on that day and to designate the day as Labor Day
The form that the observance and celebration of Labor Day should take were outlined in the first proposal of the holiday — a street parade to exhibit to the public "the strength and esprit de corps of the trade and labor organizations" of the community, followed by a festival for the recreation and amusement of the workers and their families. Parades, festivals , barbeques, this became the pattern for the celebrations of Labor Day.The Speeches by prominent men and women were introduced later, as more emphasis was placed upon the economic and civic significance of the holiday.
Through the years the nation gave increasing emphasis to Labor Day. The first governmental recognition came through municipal ordinances passed during 1885 and 1886. From them developed the movement to secure state legislation. The first state bill was introduced into the New York legislature, but the first to become law was passed by Oregon on February 21, 1887. During the year four more states — Colorado, Massachusetts, New Jersey, and New York — created the Labor Day holiday by legislative enactment
Historical Hints:
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As the Industrial Revolution took hold of the nation, the average American in the late 1800s worked 12-hour days, seven days a week in order to make a basic living. Children were also working, as they provided cheap labor to employers and laws against child labor were not strongly enforced.
With the long hours and terrible working conditions, American unions became more prominent and voiced their demands for a better way of life. On Tuesday September 5, 1882, 10,000 workers marched from city hall to Union Square in New York City, holding the first-ever Labor Day parade. As years passed, more states began to hold these parades, but Congress would not legalize the holiday until 12 years later.
On May 11, 1886, workers of the Pullman Palace Car Company in Chicago struck to protest wage cuts and the firing of union representatives. On July 4, President Grover Cleveland dispatched troops to Chicago. Much rioting and bloodshed ensued, but the government's actions broke the strike and the boycott soon collapsed. Three union officials were jailed for disobeying the injunction. The strike brought worker's rights to the public eye and Congress declared, in 1894, that the first Monday in September would be the holiday for workers, known as Labor Day.
The founder of Labor Day remains unclear, but some credit either Peter McGuire, co-founder of the American Federation of Labor, or Matthew Maguire, a secretary of the Central Labor Union, for proposing the holiday.
The character of the Labor Day celebration has undergone a change in recent years
Labor Day now carries less significance as a celebration of working people and more as the end of summer. Schools, government offices and businesses are closed on Labor Day so people can get in o
ne last trip to the beach or have one last cookout before the weather starts to turn colder.
Other countries, including Italy,celebrate International Labor day (also known as May Day) on May 1. The date was adopted in Canada in 1894 and by socialist delegates in Paris in 1889, in commemoration of the Haymarket Square Riot in Chicago of 1886. Fearing a commemoration of socialism, US President Grover Cleveland opted for the holiday to take place in September, honoring the original Labor Day parade of 1882.
Our modern celebration of Mayday as a working class holiday evolved from the struggle for the eight hour day in 1886. May 1, 1886 saw national strikes in the United States and Canada for an eight hour day called by the Knights of Labour.
Summing up...
LABOR DAY IN THE USA
Date: first Monday of September (an halfway between Indipendence Day and Thanksgiving Day)
History:
-September 1882:parade in honor of the working class by the Knights of Labor in New York
-1887:Labor Day became a state holiday in Oregon, Colorado, New York, Massachusetts and New Jersey
- 1894:recognition of Labor Day as an official national holiday
Evolution of the Holiday
-from the day of the "working man" to a simply day of rest
-"last fling of summer" festival
-last weekend for parties before returning to school
Events and celebrations
PAST:
- street parade
-festival for the recreation and amusement of the workers and their families
-picnics (Irish stew, homemade bread, apple pie)
-fireworks
later:
-speeches by prominent men and women:
emphasis placed upon the economic and civic significance of the holiday
PRESENT:
-political demonstrations are rare
-only some cities have parades
-picnics, barbecues, fireworks displays, water sports and public art events
-trips to beaches and other resort areas
-since 1966: telethon of the Muscular Dystrophy Association
Brief comparison with ltaly:
La Festa del Lavoro
Date: May 1
History:
-American roots
1.1886 general strike in USA (eight-hours workday)
2.Early May 1886:Chicago Haymarket Riots
-1891:The International Confernce in Brussels made May 1 the International Worker's Day to remember the lives lost among this American demonstration
-beginning of 1900: May Day was marked by the demand of the rght of universal suffrage and then by the oppostion to the Lybian enterprise and to the partecipation of Italy in the World War.
-During the Fascism ,Mussolini prohibited the celebration
-Reintroduction in 1945 after the Liberation
Evolution of the Holiday:
-from the Worker's day to a simply day of rest
-"first tasting of summer"
Events and Celebrations
-demonstrations of the trade unions in some cities
- occasion for trips
-since the'90 the trade unions (Cgil, Cisl and Uil) organize a massive free rock concert in Rome's Piazza San Giovanni
References
References:
Wikipedia Thanksgiving: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thanksgiving
Thanksgiving story: http://wilstar.com/holidays/thankstr.htm
Annie's Thanksgiving Page: http://www.annieshomepage.com/thanksgivinghistory.html
Thanksgiving on the Net: http://www.holidays.net/thanksgiving/
Thanksgiving dinner:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thanksgiving_dinner
Thanksgiving Day symbols:http://www.thanksgiving-day.org/thankgivingday-symbols.html
http://www.theholidayspot.com/thanksgiving/symbols.htm
Thanksgiving Day customs: http://www.thanksgiving-day.org/thanksgiving-day-customs.html
Presidential pardon (The turkey that lives to see another day): http://www.infoplease.com/spot/tgturkey2.html
Thanksgiving Dinner: file:///C:/Documents%20and%20Settings/Media%20Soft%20Srl/Desktop/Thanksgiving_dinner.htm
[1] http://www.gkindia.com/holidays/thanksgivingday.htm
(References of Labor Day)
http://en.wikipedia.org./wiki/Labor_Day
http://wilstar.com/holidays/laborday.htm
http://usinfo.state.gov/scv/life_and_culture/holidays/labor_day.html
http://vienna.usembassy.gov/en/us/labor_day.htm
(references of The Indipendence Day)
http://www.celebrate-fourthofjuly.com/
http://www.ny.com/holiday/july4/
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Independence_Day_%28United_States%29
http://www.corpoforestale.it/compiti-organizzazione-tradizioni/festa_repubblica/lafesta.htm
http://www.clubfreccetricolori.com/website/content/blogcategory/1/32/
http://gurukul.american.edu/heintze/fourth.htm
Comments (22)
lucreziabis said
at 7:06 pm on Apr 19, 2007
Dear Francesca and frau Giorgio, I tried to write down the main points we are going to analyse in our new wiki page. Plese improve and embellish it!
See you sooner
Lucrezia
Francesca said
at 12:00 pm on Apr 20, 2007
Dear colleagues, I have just added my piece of work for our presentation. Moreover, I embellished a little our wiki page in order to make it clearer by separating our topics and adding further information. At the end of my piece of subject I put a list of links where to find useful information. I will start to write my piece of presentation in the following days so that you will be able to send me a few comments whereas the content is clear and concise enough. See you soon, have a nice weekend. Francesca
Francesca said
at 8:01 pm on Apr 27, 2007
Hi Lucrezia and Annalisa, tomorrow morning I will paste my work on our wiki page so that you can have a look and we can discuss together the content (I also have a few questions to aks you). For the moment, I am summing up the information that I have collected from many interesting websites (there is so much to tell, but we must try to be as concise and clear as possible).
See you tomorrow on our wiki!
Bye Francesca
Annalisa said
at 10:15 am on Apr 28, 2007
OK..I'll wait
I'm also adding some information but I think that generally I'll keep the general structure that I've written before.
Lucrezia Bissaro said
at 10:38 am on Apr 28, 2007
Dear all. It's also difficult for me to choose what to write in my section, as Francesca said there is so much and we need to be coincise! I'll paste this afternoon my work, so colud you please look at it and give my some advice? thank you very much! bye bye
Francesca said
at 1:05 pm on Apr 28, 2007
Dear colleagues, I have just added my piece of work on our wiki. Do you think that it is well organized and clear enough or do I have to cut or add something?
Dear Annalisa, I think that it is a good idea to keep this structure for the presentation of your piece of work.
Now I will start thinking how to organize my power point presentation. Do you have any suggestions? This afternoon I will add a rough copy of my presentation.
I am also trying to find nice picture about Thanksgiving day..
I have got a last question for you. Since in Italy we don't have this feast, I would like to point out the aspect of Thanksgiving family reunions and compare this characteristic with our Christmas. Do you think it could be a good idea?
Thank you for your help!
See you soon, good work!
Francesca
Lucrezia Bissaro said
at 1:19 pm on Apr 28, 2007
Yes, I think it's a good point to make a comparison with Xmas in ITaly. As soon as I will finish my section I send you my powerpoint part, then one of us can organize and copy it,so we can upload it in our wikipage.
Is it ok?
Francesca said
at 9:21 am on Apr 29, 2007
Dear Lucrezia, I have just read your piece of work. I think that it quite clear and concise. Good Work! Now I am working on my power point presentation. If it ok for you I will paste our presentation on our wiki this afternoon.
Have a nice Sunday!
Bye, Francesca
Annalisa said
at 12:23 pm on Apr 29, 2007
Hi girls,
I read both your works and I think they're well structured and quite concise..anyway, we have to see our final power point presentations...
As regards the comparison between Thanksgiving Day and our feeling of Christmas, as we said before, I think it's a good idea to mention it.However, I think the comparison should not be too long.
Annalisa said
at 12:52 pm on Apr 29, 2007
Dear Francesca,
I'm sending you my presentation slides so that you can paste it with the other works..Thanks! Please let me know if you think there's something to add, delete or change.
Annalisa
Lucrezia Bissaro said
at 5:17 pm on Apr 29, 2007
Dear Annalisa, I read your presentation slides and I think they are well done, as Sarah said, we don't have to write much otherwise no one will listento us! Let me what you think about my work!Francesca could you also send your part? I'll read it and give some helpful( i hope) advice!BYe
Maria Chiara said
at 3:56 pm on Apr 30, 2007
Dear girls,
as first rough draft It's quite good! I really like the layout and the colours you chose, as well as the images. Just be careful when typing: slide 2 (Knigdom>Kingdom), slide 4 (patrotic>patriotic), slide 5 (taht>that, amog>among, happyness>happiness), slide 7 (Itlian>Italian). Moreover, slide 11: World war>World War, with capital letter (or at least I think so!); slide 18: The ...?? The subject is missing. A few remarks more.
1)Slide 3: you mention the Second Continental Congress. Great! But don't you think it would be nice to mention the first one as well? It took place in Philadelphia in 1774. This is because if one reads "Second Continental Congress", they ask themselves: "And the first one? When was it?". Perhaps it would be nice to mention the existence of both Congresses.
2)Slide 4: the title is "Fourth of July Rituales". Perhaps, if you write "4th July Rituals", you grasp the reader's attention more.
3)Slide 5: "Fourth Juny (July??)at school": I think you should try to formulate the sentence more clearly... It's not clear what do you mean, at least to me!
Apart from that, job well done!
See you soon,
M. Chiara
lucreziabis said
at 10:45 pm on Apr 30, 2007
Dear Maria Chiara, thank you very much for your advice, asyou probably can image I did some typing mistakes! Now I correct them immediately!! Thank you vey much!As far as Fourth of july at school is concerned I wanted to show how American patriotic are. Since the children go to school they are taught about the importance of their Nation, whereas in Italy is not considered at all.
Francesca said
at 8:32 am on May 1, 2007
Dear Maria Chiara, thank you really much for your helpful suggestions. We are going to correct our typing mistakes and maybe mayke it clearer the content in slide 5, as you pointed out in your comment. Do you think that I should cut something in slide 14 "History" and 15 "A new Traditional Holiday" or do you think it is ok?
See you soon,
take care!
Francesca
Lucrezia Bissaro said
at 1:37 pm on May 1, 2007
Dear all, I tried to rewrite the slide concerning the Second Continental Congress, could you please have a look and tell me what you think about it? as far as The 4th of july at school slide is concerned I 'd like to leave it as it is,just to arise the attention and then explain the meaning during my presentation..
susanne83 said
at 11:51 pm on May 1, 2007
Hi girls!
Alice and I read your presentation carefully and thought about possible improvements. First of all, we think you did a great job: you chose a very interesting topic and collected a lot of information on the web. As Maria Chiara, we like the pictures and the colours of your presentation. :-) Moreover, it was a good idea to make a table of contents; in this way, the listeners know what you are going to talk about.
However, as it is always possible to improve one's work we will list below what we thought you can do in order to improve your presentation (obviously this is our opinion and you may not share it but we hope the suggestions will be useful):-)
1. In order to make the form of your presentation coherent, you should use the same font for all of the slides (slide 11 is different) and the titles should be the same size and font. Moreover, it would be better to use either the same colours of font throughout the presentation or use three different colours for the three differnet parts. At the beginning, your names are at the bottom of the page: put them either on every page or omit them.
2. You created 23 files and we only have 15 minutes for our presentation. This means, that you have about 40 seconds per slide (It took us about 20 minutes to read the slides). Our advice: Shorten the presentation and try to leave out the less important things. (You could, for example, delete the table of contents of the thanksgiving part).
susanne83 said
at 11:51 pm on May 1, 2007
3. You put a quotation on your first slide. It would be nice if there was the name of the person who said this sentence (e.g. Abraham Lincoln, 1863)
2. In order to indicate in a clear way your fist topic, put the title of the fist part (Indipendence Day) on top of slide2.
4. Maria Chiara already indicated some typing mistakes. there a very few inaccuracies (for example slide 6 OUtside).
5. The presentation may be more coherent (from a formal point of view) if the punctuation was the same. In addition, in some cases you can improve the punctuation (check particularly the lists).
6. Slide19: you use three plurals and one singular. You could cranberries instead of cranberry.
7. Some possible language improvements: slide6 feast instead of fest; slide7 the italian army;slide11 participation instead of partecipation;slide 16 people thank.
We really hope that our suggestions are useful. Keep up the good work:-)
See you soon,
Susanne and Alice
Francesca said
at 10:50 am on May 2, 2007
Hi Susanne and Alice, thank you really much for your suggestions. They are really helpful!Moreover, as you pointed out, it would be better to use the same font and size for the titles.
See you soon,
Francesca
Annalisa said
at 11:12 am on May 2, 2007
Hi Maria Chiara and Susanne,
Thanks a lot for your suggestions! How many typing mistakes!
We'll try to work on them!
Annalisa
Lucrezia Bissaro said
at 2:44 pm on May 2, 2007
Dear Susanne and Alice, thank you very much, your advice are great! now we will work on them! See you sooner
Lucrezia
Sarah said
at 10:36 pm on May 2, 2007
Hello all, here's my feedback. First of all, you've done a good job and are at a good point even if, as Susanne says, improvements can be made. I completely agree with all the feedback your peers have provided in particular about format (uniforming fonts, colors, titles) and spelling mistakes. I have a general comment to make about the purpose of the presentaton. The aim is to compare similar events in the two countries, right? Therefore, rather than merely providing facts, it might also be useful to provide at least 3 slides (one for each celebration) reflecting on the similarities and differences. This is important because your audience (Americans and Italians) will know about the celebrations but might be more interested in why you think there are differences. For example, you could reflect on why July 4th is so important in the States and why June 2nd so insignificant in Italy (I myself would be curious to know!) Similarly, might there actually be many similarities between Labour Day and 1 maggio or is it celebrated more in Italy? I like the table of contents at the beginning but wouldn't put one again at the beginning of the discussion on Thanksgiving. There may very well be too many slides on Thanksgiving, compared to the other celebrations (see my comments in the attached file). Your discussion of the three celebrations and presentation could end with a comparison of religious vs. national holidays in the two countries and the reasons for this significant difference. Finally, a word about parallelism. For each celebration you first give historical background, which I think is a wise choice, however, it might be more readable if this was uniformed into the same or similar format for each history slide.
Last but not least, as your peers say, you've only got 15 minutes! The first person will have to do a short intro and start, the second do lots of contents and the third finish up and do conclusions.
I've uploaded your ppt with comments.
Sarah
Sarah said
at 11:18 pm on May 2, 2007
Hey guys, for some unknown reason when I try and edit your page the browser gets blocked and I have to close the browser. Therefore, to simplify my life I've uploaded the new ppt with comments to the front page - you'll find it there.
Sarah
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